This feedback was taken from a group of 30 year 9 students. Age 16+ which is the border age of our target audience. We thought this would be a good age group to aim the questions at as we gaged weather it was OK for 16 year olds, as they seemed to like it and appreciate the adult nature, we believe we made the right decision about this.
As you can see from these audience feedback questionnaires, what is being said is very good. The students who watched it believed the footage looked like a real girl band, and as you can see 'did not expect it to be so good'. This was very relieving for us to find out that what we had worked so hard on was appreciated. There were 30 other pages, therefor we only picked a few f the best ones, as you can see they believed we stuck to the conventions of a real girl band music video, and they believed it was similar to Lady Gagas footage.
This is our finished website, and when we decided on this site we wanted to conform to the conventions of solos singers and also girl band sites. We looked into sites such as Beyonce's and Pussycat Dolls sites. We saw that all the sites we viewed had a focus point, an image at the top of the band, for the audience to establish who the website is representing. We conformed to this and had another of our photo shoot images at the top of the image. We also used similar colours that are on our Rap Magazine Cover, to make it all fit together well. We used similar colours to The Pussycat Dolls, blacks and pinks, and also used similar images, as they have an image of themselves on a pole, which we emulated. We also used the image of us all in black, looking similar, to show a united front as a real girlband, this is common in the sites we viewed. I also found that the websites of other bands were done in the third person, talking about the band, and had tour dates, other celebrities, and release dates. We also used this to make our site look real, using links at the top of the page to take you to other pages. We did not challenge any of the conventions for this website, we embraced them to create a realistic band site. Once again, the three of our tasks together look very realistic, and the use of similar colours all the way through create a theme, and make our band look real, and as shows the thought we put in to all aspects of the band creation. The use of the photo shoot images on the two smaller tasks keeps the consistency and authenticity, as they may not be the same, but they have the same styling and background.
We again had audience feedback for the website. However we had verbal communication with the audience rather than written. The audience was aged 16+, and all liked the site. They said it was good how they colours and ideas were similar throughout all of our tasks, and said that it was very professional how we had links to other pages and had spoken in the third person.The audience said that the only change they would make is more images of the band as other pages do have a lot of images of themselves. This is something we are going to take into account and make sure that next time we do a similar task we will ask the audience for feedback before the finished product is made.
We used media technologies all the way through the process of making the website. When I researched into the website, i used google to find the sites of other celebrities, prints screens of whichcan be found earlier on my blog. I used print screens on my blog to upload images when researching into this site. The research and planning was interlocked with this task as the planning came after looking at other websites to see what I had to do. I also used links to other sites to make sure I knew what we were doing. When planning, we had already used the photo shoot to get the images we needed to put on the site, so the camera was again used. When actually creating the site Emily used Iweb on the Macbook to do so. It was the best programme to use we thought, as we could access it easily on the macbook, and also it had to technology we needed to add links to other pages and upload the images in the correct place.
As you can see this is our magazine cover. When making this magazine cover, we had already challenged a convention of girl band magazines. We decided to use a Rap Magazine. We did this because we wanted to stand out as a girl band and be controversial. Also, the conventions we were using with our video fitted more with the Rap genre of magazine, as there are females who dominate in the rap genre, and also are the focus point of the magazine, as apposed to being in the background of the men. This shows in my research into our magazine. We did however, conform to the conventions of the rap genre, using the bold colours, and keeping the text the same all the way through. Also, we wore string vests, converse and Adidas, very commonly seen in rap magazines, as apposed to our earlier look of shorts and little tops, which we did on purpose to show our different personalities. As I have already mentioned, I think that this mixed with our other tasks is very realistic and professional, and the fact that we had a photo shoot for the images makes our magazine look very professional.
When receiving the audience feedback from our filming, we also asked for the same from our magazine cover, however this was more informal, as we asked for spoken feedback. The majority of the people that viewed it, age 16+, seemed to like the cover. They said it followed the conventions of real magazine covers, and they liked how the image was different from that of the music video, as although it was still sexy and seductive, we looked a little more comfortable in leggings and Adidas, and showed a different more relaxed side to us.
When researching into this magazine cover, again I used the internet, looking at RAP It UP magazine, and many different magazines like this, as you can see on my research post. I looked into Rap from the start as I knew this is the image we wanted to create. We also looked at real magazines in the shops to look for the images used and the text on the pages. When planning this magazine covers, I looked at paint to add the image and then put colour and text around it, as this is an easy way to add and remove colour. I did this simply to see what colours worked with the background and the image and finally decided upon pink and black, as it matched well with the image. When actually constructing the Magazine cover, we used word, as it was very easy, however, we used a professional 23 megapixel camera to take the images of us for the magazine. This was a very good quality camera and as you can see from the image it is very crisp and clear, making the cover look professional. When evaluating this cover, I uploaded the image onto my blog, and am currently using Blogger to create this evaluation.
As you cannot see the name badges we prepared clearly due to the camera quality; Left to right - Emily Roberts, Christie Robbins (me), Kirsty Shakespeare
During this performance I believe i performed to the best of my ability, during the dancing, acting, singing, building the website, editing and also creating the magazine cover. When planning the music video, we decided not to stick to the conventions of 'girl band'/'pop group' at the begging of the planning stages, we were going to convey four different sides of Lady Gaga as I have earlier explained. However, due to the complications with the group, all our ideas were changed, and we decided to completely conform to the girl band genre. Commonly known as sexy, sassy and fierce. However, when planning, we did our story boards with 3 people, as we thought Emily would be involved in the filming, however, after the incident Emily could not perform, therefor we had to use the story boards but change the shots to suit 3 people. I believe that our music video developed the conventions of the real media products we used as inspiration; for example, usually in music videos, especially male rappers, the female is at the back dancing in dark colours, or sitting on the mens laps and giving them what they want. We decided to use our two actors as the main focus of the footage, and make them fierce, and turn the idea of men being more powerful on its head.This is how we developed and challenged one of the conventions of music videos. We then conformed and used some of the features to enhance our footage. We decided to use the 'strutting forward' shot that tends to be in all girl band videos. We used this with a wide shot with the focus directly on me and Kirsty, this made us look strong and powerful, and also looked realistic to the genre of girl band;
As you can see here we used the same sort of image as Girlicous, and many other girl bands use to look fierce and strong. We also used the shot of me and Kirsty separately on the floor singing, this was just a head shot. This is using the same conventions of many girlbands, and also Lady Gaga, who uses a similar shot in her music video. We used this because it is sexy and appeals to men, which is also conforming to the use of the theory of the Male Gaze, which we have researched. Being on the floor looking 'seductive' will appear to the male gaze, but keep us as the focus point looking strong, which will therefore also appeal to females. We also used the fake dallas, emulating Gagas original footage, and this made it look real and professional. This is using conventions of music videos to our advantage;
We also used a smoke machine, as this fits with the themes of girl bands, and also again Lady Gaga uses a smoke machine in Beautiful Dirty Rich. This was for effect when shooting, and also to make our film look more professional and high budget.;
As you can see at the bottom of the shot there is smoke entering the shot. This makes it look more professional and expensive, and also adds the effect of mystery and sexuality.
I believe the music video together with the two ancillary tasks is very effective, and creates a professional and realistic look. The thought we out into the colours and the shots creates realistic footage, and also the conforming to real girl bands helped us to create a band worthy of you tube. I think viewing all of the three articles together makes the band look very realistic and makes our band seem real.
When our finished footage was seen by our fellow class mates, and also a class of teenagers, we asked them to fill out questionnaires to get some audience feedback. From the feedback, which was 99% good, we found that the favoured part of the music video was the pink background with our pink clothes throwing money;
and also our first shot, of us standing on the podiums. They said they liked these shots as they gave them the general idea of the film, and also they liked the effects and the editing. We then found that the use of lighting, editing and mise en scene went down well, with many saying that they thought the use of props made us look like a real band. Most of the comments said they would not change anything about the video, however a few said they would not be as revealing as us, which we took well, but thought that this was a good reason to direct our footage at older teens rather than younger, as they did not appreciate the image we were trying to portray, whereas the older peers in our group said they liked the clothing and the ideas uses, as they went with the genre. We also asked if they thought our footage fitted with Lady Gaga, most replied with yes and said that the fast editing and the strange sharp shots (and 'weirdness') of the footage was much like Lady Gaga's unusual style. They also said we looked like a real girlband. From this we believe most people like our music video and we aimed it at the correct audience, (17+) (I have created a new post showing the actual audience feedback sheets and gone into more detail about this)
During our research, planning and evaluation stages, we used as much technology as possible. When planning our music video, we drew up our Story boards, scanned them and uploaded them onto our blogs. This is an easy way to access the pages, and makes sure we cannot loose them. I also created a Prezi, which is linked to my blog, to highlight our target audience, which helps clearly label and explain the reasons why we chose to do our footage for 17+. I did this to make sure we all understood who we were aiming at and to make sure our video was going to be suitable. During the research stages, we used Youtube mainly to find out about our chosen genre. We also used the T.V to look into different footage and music videos. This helped me as when I was editing I was able to edit for the right audience, understanding who it was meant to be aimed at. For instance, the sexy images used, and the use of the 'romantic' setting I used, would not have been appropriate for younger viewers. When evaluating, I have used print screens of images to upload onto my blog, I have also uploaded our music videos onto the page. We decided then to sit and record ourselves evaluating parts of the film. We then uploaded this as you can see above. We tried to use as much technology as possible when planning and making this music video, to make it look professional.
This is our finalised magazine cover As you can see, we have stuck to the conventions of the rap genre, using the bold image of us for the attention of the reader, using bright colours and font.
These are all images of rap magazines we looked at to get inspiration for ours. As you can see there are females as well as males on these magazines, and the females are centre of the image, looking strong and fierce, this is why we chose RAP genre for our magazine, as it continues our idea of strong females being the focus point. You can see from these images that the colours are bright and bold with the image being the strong focus point, which is what we wish to emulate in our cover, using a picture of the band from our photo shoot. There is also a bar code and date, along with the price in one of the corners of the magazine, which we will emulate. The image we are going to use for the magazine shows us in string vests, converse, and adidas, which sticks to the conventions of a rap music video better than any other magazine we believe. As you can see here the female is the main focus for the reader, followed by bold colours, with consistent text on the side. We will conform to this idea, using pinks and blacks, however, we will not have the amount of writing that is on this image, as I believe it is taking away from the image. Hopefully, using all of these techniques, and trying to emulate similar ideas, our magazine cover will look professional, and conform to the conventions of the rap genre.
